Crit feedback

During the Crit I have been adviced to look back at my initial drawings of sin city and add something more dynimic to my design.

What is interesting in Sin city is the use of the black and white contrast which creates a comic book/noir effect.The use of others colors in some scenes like red, yellow and blue enhances the object which stands out from the black and white background(for example the eyes of one of the girl in the city or the red of the bed).

Also the way the camera moves is very dynamic; the characters of the story are not real, therefore they can make movements that in real life could not be possible.Could I introduce a camera movement in my design?